Dilara this is much improved. Lovely to see some of the first shots of the video posted during half term! The brand on the blog background is strong - I'd like to see more photos of Layla - our artist. She's hiding at the moment and I don't have strong enough sense of who she is. If you'd done the photos for the ancillary this would help rectify this. Interesting HUGE flurry of activity on 7th October I note!! Targets as follows:
1) complete individual research posts on synergy (blog task 13 research) and analysis of original video (or similar Ellie vid) (blog task 17). These will show individual input well and raise marks.
2) show what revisions you have done with your ideas and production schedule since the pitch - action on the feedback must be shown.
3) make sure your OWN ideas for digipack and website are posted - I'm not sure if they are your ideas or the groups at the moment - it will help you a lot when you come to design your own to have worked o them now.
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